West on 30

[Leaves]

I really don't know what this is. It just came to me as I was thinking of getting away.

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West on 30

I could go west on 30
Up the hill to straight stretch
Push it to 90
And know the cops will never catch me
Then hit the airport
Fly me as far east as it goes
Hope for a short layover
Somewhere on the east coast
Then I leave it all behind me
Everything and everyone
I leave it all behind me
In the orange of the setting sun
And I know exactly
Where I am goin'
After I cross
The great Atlantic Ocean
Just me and my guitar are gonna live
Under a bridge
In London

[Leaves]

BUMP

It's so dang short it should make for an easy crit. Come on people!

[SMOK3]

I just dont like it that much, it didnt flow right for me... It just sounded to pushed and forced as a song... I bet the cops could catch you at 90 though :lol:

[Leaves]

I just dont like it that much, it didnt flow right for me... It just sounded to pushed and forced as a song... I bet the cops could catch you at 90 though :lol:
I meant that no cops are on that stretch of highway, but yeah, it sounds like I meant what you thought I meant. Thanks for the crit though.

[Agrim]

I really don't know what this is. It just came to me as I was thinking of getting away.

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West on 30

I could go west on 30
Up the hill to straight stretch
Push it to 90
And know the cops will never catch me
Then hit the airport
Fly me as far east as it goes
Hope for a short layover
Somewhere on the east coast
Then I leave it all behind me
Everything and everyone
I leave it all behind me
In the orange of the setting sun
And I know exactly
Where I am goin'
After I cross
The great Atlantic Ocean
Just me and my guitar are gonna live
Under a bridge
In London

I love it. Maybe it's because i'm also thinking of running away, maybe it's because I've written countless numbers of songs just like this. But I enjoyed it.

I could go west on 30
Up the hill to straight stretch
Push it to 90
And know the cops will never catch me
Then hit the airport
Fly me as far east as it goes
Hope for a short layover
Somewhere on the east coast

That was the best part. Sounds like a sublime song almost? I dunno, I really like it. Simple and to the point. Good job man :thumb:

[Leaves]

Thanks Agrim! And BIZ-to-the-UMP.