Better

[qotsaboy]

Hey everybody, this is my first post and song ive ever written. SO can you guys please do me a favor and just crit this and tell me what ya think! :naughty:
Better

I felt alone for the longest time
No matter what tho you’d keep me in line
But you felt like you had to cheat
Cheat cheat cheat on me you see
Its not like Id forget so easily
But ya kno….im better off
Without you

Im better
Better
Off without you
Without you
Im better
Better
off without you
Better off without you

Its been a while since ive thought of you
But believe me when I say I still do
You still keep comin back to me
After im on my feet
But ya still think you can have me
Well your wrong

Im better
Better
Off without you
Without you
Im better
Better
off without you
Better off without you

I don’t kno what to say
Just I think about you everyday
But I kno
I kno you were bad for me
For me for me for me for me
now I can see

That Im better
Better
Off without you
Without you
Im better
Better
off without you
Better off without you

[XLax]

I'm not saying I could do better, but I found it "meh". But that's just as a poem alone. I suppose the better part of that song would have to be the music