Not gonna put the title up here

[Riding The Short Bus]

I wrote this song last ngiht, well I guess early this morning cause it was like at 12:30. But a little background info on it. A little over a month ago, I found that one of my friends had tried to kill themselves, and the night I found out, I wrote the chorus and a start. I didn't like it and last night I started over and only kept the chorus. It kinda repeats, but I mostly trying to get a point across, and I think it does that. It is supposed to be a little bit of a slow song. not like overly slow, but you get hte idea.



It tears me up inside
to know who you are
It tears me up inside
To the pain that you feel
Sometimes (gotta sing this out like: sooooommmmtiiimmmeess)
you gotta fall before you win
and sometimes (sing this one out too)
you gotta loose before you win
and the answers you need
are the ones you cannont find
Life is such a wonderful thing to waste

I just want you to know
Theres someone who cares
I just want you to know
Theres someone who will listen
I just want you to know
Theres someone thinking about you

I just want you to know
That every hurts
and that everyone cries
we all have our secrets
and the piant inside
life is too good a thing to waste

I just want you to knoe
Theres someone who cares
I just want you to know
theres someone who will listen
I just want you to know
Theres someone thinking about you

I just want you to know
That it tears me up inside
to see who you are
and It tears me up inside
to know the pain you feel
Life is such a beautiful thing to waste

I just want you to know
That I care
I just want you to know
That I will listen
I just want you to know
That i'll be thinking of you


here are the three other songs i have done so far:

1. http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=361545

2. http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=361002

3.http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=361172

[DazedMountainTop]

Perty good, man. Took suicide into an anti-emo style of song...thank god. Lol. It is a bit repetative, but since you don't seem to care, more power to you. Good job. Only thing is that you spelled a few things wrong...but the flow is nice...I just don't think I could personally take the repetativeness of it if I were listening to it. Good job in any case.

[Riding The Short Bus]

I suck at spelling.

[Popeye]

that ain't no lie. repetitive but you couldn't care less. It was a good one though. Keep it up. Good job.

[SMOK3]

I think what made this song even better is that its anti-emo... Thank you for that.

[jade858907]

well, i really like it, i know that im probably be singing it for a while. i think it'd be str8 as hell to a great tune you know? its good

[Music.is.Life]

Another good one man, I can tell its from the heart.

[Riding The Short Bus]

Bump