robman304
07-05-2005, 09:40 AM
Hey everyone, here's a few of my songs that are on purevolume, please crit on the lyrics/music/arrangement. I made it so you can download all the songs instead of just low quality streaming. Thanks.
www.purevolume.com/robmartin
Alone
Hey babe you know just why
it won't sink in and you can't realize
what I know and what I'm supposed to be
yeah I know you don't tell lies
but what do you say to those puppy dog eyes
when you're at home and he'll be gone til three
cause that's what you did to me
there's plenty of lights to shine
on your head like a halo from the city lights
and cars pass by and they don't stop to watch
and this is my favorite part
don't come back here until I'm gone
I'll leave your stuff out on the lawn
I should've said that you weren't wrong
it all happens so **** fast
wasn't sure if it would last
but it lasted for so long
and you left me all alone
I saw you leave late last night
you parked your car on the parkway side
you backed on up and hit his chevrolet
now what do you have to say
don't come back here until I'm gone
I'll leave your stuff out on the lawn
I should've said that you weren't wrong
it all happens so **** fast
wasn't sure if it would last
but it lasted for so long
and you left me all alone
The Next Best Beautiful Thing
i know you're sick of hearing songs about the rain
but i wonder if you still feel the same way I do
i still can't find a way, to see you everyday
but i know my heart will lead me to the truth
i thought that i might start to let you go
but now i miss you more than you could know
and do you miss me? or is it only in my dreams
and when it rains do you still think of me?
this many years i haven't found
the next best beautiful thing
all of the years they drag me down
to the next best beautiful thing
i try to feel happy but i can't
and it's time you understand
i just can't be feelin like this every day
maybe it's time i left
just packed my bags and went
cause i'm sick of living in this small town place
and i know that you'll feel better when i'm gone
better than I've felt all along
this many years i haven't found
the next best beautiful thing
all of the years they drag me down
to the next best beautiful thing
now that i found you
i won't let go
this many years i haven't found
the next best beautiful thing
all of the years they drag me down
to the next best beautiful thing
I've got one more on there, but it's pretty easy to hear the lyrics, and it's short, so I didn't bother. Thanks for listening guys.
www.purevolume.com/robmartin
Alone
Hey babe you know just why
it won't sink in and you can't realize
what I know and what I'm supposed to be
yeah I know you don't tell lies
but what do you say to those puppy dog eyes
when you're at home and he'll be gone til three
cause that's what you did to me
there's plenty of lights to shine
on your head like a halo from the city lights
and cars pass by and they don't stop to watch
and this is my favorite part
don't come back here until I'm gone
I'll leave your stuff out on the lawn
I should've said that you weren't wrong
it all happens so **** fast
wasn't sure if it would last
but it lasted for so long
and you left me all alone
I saw you leave late last night
you parked your car on the parkway side
you backed on up and hit his chevrolet
now what do you have to say
don't come back here until I'm gone
I'll leave your stuff out on the lawn
I should've said that you weren't wrong
it all happens so **** fast
wasn't sure if it would last
but it lasted for so long
and you left me all alone
The Next Best Beautiful Thing
i know you're sick of hearing songs about the rain
but i wonder if you still feel the same way I do
i still can't find a way, to see you everyday
but i know my heart will lead me to the truth
i thought that i might start to let you go
but now i miss you more than you could know
and do you miss me? or is it only in my dreams
and when it rains do you still think of me?
this many years i haven't found
the next best beautiful thing
all of the years they drag me down
to the next best beautiful thing
i try to feel happy but i can't
and it's time you understand
i just can't be feelin like this every day
maybe it's time i left
just packed my bags and went
cause i'm sick of living in this small town place
and i know that you'll feel better when i'm gone
better than I've felt all along
this many years i haven't found
the next best beautiful thing
all of the years they drag me down
to the next best beautiful thing
now that i found you
i won't let go
this many years i haven't found
the next best beautiful thing
all of the years they drag me down
to the next best beautiful thing
I've got one more on there, but it's pretty easy to hear the lyrics, and it's short, so I didn't bother. Thanks for listening guys.