An angry song grr...

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An angry song grr... :naughty:

Pressure Makes Me Crack- Zak Taylor
All the weight crushing my shoulders,
days are getting longer and colder.
I'm loosing sleep over this anxiety.
Soon my anger will burst out of me.

I'm going to explode.
Get out of my way.
Do what your told.
Or die by me today.

I feel it building.
I feel it building.
I feel it building.
I feel it building.

Now!(screamed by all members of the band)

I'll tear your f***ing head off!
Back to f*** away!
I cant control myself.
I've acted happy so long.
My emotions are gone.
And your next.

[BlindWriting]

Lame.
0/10.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

You're done, forever.

[SMOK3]

Errrmmm wow, I'm sorry you went through this as a writer... Trash it, in the nicest words possible

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alright sweet.

[SMOK3]

alright sweet.

Not something I as a song writer would like to hear ha :lol: You must remember this is only constructive criticism