suicidal heart

[AnotherGuitarist]

So I’m a little on the quiet side today
That’s only because I swallowed my tongue
Trying to find the words to say that were choking me
But it turns out it’s much better this way
You never could understand my words
Ao I challenge you to read my thoughts instead
Just like I’ve been struggling to do for years
So I’m a little emotionless today
That’s only because my face has gone numb
Trying to keep the face you love to see
But it turns out its much better this way
You never could love this face if you tried
So I challenge you to read my unfinished letters
Just like the ones that collect animals on your bed
Outline my heart with chalk on your pillowcase
Turn it over so it’s face down in your dirt
Wouldn’t want your tears to smudge it in your eyes
It doesn’t promise money, it doesn’t promise gold
Even though this is a more than rough road
It still holds a love that never will grow old

[HypnotiQSorcerer]

mmm,

its not bad
you barely feel the flow though,

mmm
i suggest trying to create verses or stanzas
i can crit this well unless you do

[AnotherGuitarist]

So I’m a little on the quiet side today
That’s only because I swallowed my tongue
Trying to find the words to say that were choking me
But it turns out it’s much better this way
You never could understand my words
So I challenge you to read my thoughts instead
Just like I’ve been struggling to do for years

So I’m a little emotionless today
That’s only because my face has gone numb
Trying to keep the face you love to see
But it turns out its much better this way
You never could love this face if you tried
So I challenge you to read my unfinished letters
Just like the ones that collect animals on your bed

Outline my heart with chalk on your pillowcase
Turn it over so it’s face down in your dirt
Wouldn’t want your tears to smudge it in your eyes
It doesn’t promise money, it doesn’t promise gold
Even though this is a more than rough road
It still holds a love that never will grow old

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broken down for ya