song of questions. do u likey?

[zfmt]

Well, I thought I would make a song mainly out of questions.
let me know if you like it or hate it.

Simple Questions Spark Unknowen Answers Zak Taylor
Whats life like when we die? Where do we go will this planet survive? All this curiosity builds up angst and anxiety. What will happen to you? What will happen to me? How can I sleep knowing that I may not wake? How can I take a risk with out hesitating? Will heaven be waiting for me or will it be nothing but a long sleep? Why do I wake to waste another day? I know my time is fading away. All the time wasted goes unquestioned, soon I will have no time to waste. I can try to make things better, but I know they are getting worse. When I expect something of myself, people only end up hurt. Where do people go when they are not around. Do they start a new life? Or just rot underground? Will I one day be free or will i be only a slave to salery? How can I leap without looking? How can I speak without thinking? How can I live not knowing why I'm alive?

Soon I will know.
I'll figure things out.
The risks of life,
the riches and the strife.
But I wont understand,
Untill I am gone.

[HypnotiQSorcerer]

Well, I thought I would make a song mainly out of questions.
let me know if you like it or hate it.

Simple Questions Spark Unknowen Answers Zak Taylor
Whats life like when we die? Where do we go will this planet survive? All this curiosity builds up angst and anxiety. What will happen to you? What will happen to me? How can I sleep knowing that I may not wake? How can I take a risk with out hesitating? Will heaven be waiting for me or will it be nothing but a long sleep? Why do I wake to waste another day? I know my time is fading away. All the time wasted goes unquestioned, soon I will have no time to waste. I can try to make things better, but I know they are getting worse. When I expect something of myself, people only end up hurt. Where do people go when they are not around. Do they start a new life? Or just rot underground? Will I one day be free or will i be only a slave to salery? How can I leap without looking? How can I speak without thinking? How can I live not knowing why I'm alive?

Soon I will know.
I'll figure things out.
The risks of life,
the riches and the strife.
But I wont understand,
Untill I am gone.
good premise,

i suggest consolidating your questions into one main idea
that way it doesn't go all around the place

[zfmt]

alright, thanks man