Distance Distortion Factor
07-04-2005, 02:03 AM
I'm back again
I have three new ones that I want to share....
Haven't been around in awhile, working 60 hours a week just to afford new equipment can kill all aspects of your social life, anyways check them out...tell me what you think...
It's a set of three that I wrote based around one ongoing situation
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Blue, Red, and Black
Chris Brickwedde (distance distortion factor)
2005
I stare in hatered of the world around me
watching it spin in out of translucent obscurity
percieving each lie spun with another half truth
as it orbits the space between hear and nowhere
each revolution a tear for another fallen memory
another point where shore lines erode
caving the shell that protects the land below
stripped from the soul of the life inside
Each passing moment another cycle of grief
another piece of life taken from the core
A moment of molten joy in a cerrulean prision
reaching for nimbus that slips through my fingers
every failure a scar in the rock
explosure of sadness and lava pours
streaming from the heart of a beaten land
Dust fills the sky and cerrulean turns to fire
Tears of vermillion pour down on scorched earth
entrenching everything in fire melting carbon to liquid
heat distortion steals the illusion of security
soot are the lies once beheld so sacred
a wasteland sits in the wake of my verity
a river of liquid fire turns to rock and burries the pain
emotion wraped in a duvet of fire
as I stare in disgust for the world around me
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Beautiful moments
By Chris Brickwedde (Distance Distortion Factor)
copyright 2005
Open your mind she said
Just let your thoughts go and spill
Don't try to think, to organize your thoughts
Speak them from your heart rather than your mind
Say these things you feel
I don't know is not an answer
Speak to me without fear
If nothing else I have this to offer
You don't need to speak with eloquents
The coarse nature of your thoughts is enough
You can threaten to leave this all behind
But it'll never be enough to hide
I can't hide my fear, she said
This moment to precious to let go
I know I'm loosing you
Because I want time to stand still
How can you not see the obvious?
The writings been on the wall
Can't you tell by my contradiction of thought?
I feel the same as you, but to afraid to fall
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K-5
By Chris Brickwedde (Distance Distortion Factor)
Copyright 2005
What a tragedy to watch you fall down
Your heartland covered in snow
Feet sinking through the powder like a scar
Your face tinged with freezer burn
In the space between a blink and a tear
A space where only truth is known
Intention becomes iron clad
And you struggle to climb again to the top
But the ice leaves you slipping
As you search for your escape
Finding comfort in the cold
And you pass to the bottom
Comfortable in the net of powder below
Crisp air stings your eyes
Dust yourself off and look at the top
Turn your back and run away
Tear filled eyes frail like a child
Waves of confusion pass
Like the cold air in your lungs
Dreaming of warmth in a diffrent place
Each direction you turn this cold path awaits
Ice become your heart
As you flee a new direction
But you see the top and regret becomes sin
Your life lays wanting
Feet sinking in the snow
In the space between a blink and a tear
You pass to the bottom
__________________________________________________ ____
Hate to do these all in one post....but i didnt want to do three diffrent ones...anyways...ill be getting around to yours in the next few days, so look at mine :=)
I have three new ones that I want to share....
Haven't been around in awhile, working 60 hours a week just to afford new equipment can kill all aspects of your social life, anyways check them out...tell me what you think...
It's a set of three that I wrote based around one ongoing situation
__________________________________________________ __________
Blue, Red, and Black
Chris Brickwedde (distance distortion factor)
2005
I stare in hatered of the world around me
watching it spin in out of translucent obscurity
percieving each lie spun with another half truth
as it orbits the space between hear and nowhere
each revolution a tear for another fallen memory
another point where shore lines erode
caving the shell that protects the land below
stripped from the soul of the life inside
Each passing moment another cycle of grief
another piece of life taken from the core
A moment of molten joy in a cerrulean prision
reaching for nimbus that slips through my fingers
every failure a scar in the rock
explosure of sadness and lava pours
streaming from the heart of a beaten land
Dust fills the sky and cerrulean turns to fire
Tears of vermillion pour down on scorched earth
entrenching everything in fire melting carbon to liquid
heat distortion steals the illusion of security
soot are the lies once beheld so sacred
a wasteland sits in the wake of my verity
a river of liquid fire turns to rock and burries the pain
emotion wraped in a duvet of fire
as I stare in disgust for the world around me
__________________________________________________ _____
Beautiful moments
By Chris Brickwedde (Distance Distortion Factor)
copyright 2005
Open your mind she said
Just let your thoughts go and spill
Don't try to think, to organize your thoughts
Speak them from your heart rather than your mind
Say these things you feel
I don't know is not an answer
Speak to me without fear
If nothing else I have this to offer
You don't need to speak with eloquents
The coarse nature of your thoughts is enough
You can threaten to leave this all behind
But it'll never be enough to hide
I can't hide my fear, she said
This moment to precious to let go
I know I'm loosing you
Because I want time to stand still
How can you not see the obvious?
The writings been on the wall
Can't you tell by my contradiction of thought?
I feel the same as you, but to afraid to fall
__________________________________________________ ___
K-5
By Chris Brickwedde (Distance Distortion Factor)
Copyright 2005
What a tragedy to watch you fall down
Your heartland covered in snow
Feet sinking through the powder like a scar
Your face tinged with freezer burn
In the space between a blink and a tear
A space where only truth is known
Intention becomes iron clad
And you struggle to climb again to the top
But the ice leaves you slipping
As you search for your escape
Finding comfort in the cold
And you pass to the bottom
Comfortable in the net of powder below
Crisp air stings your eyes
Dust yourself off and look at the top
Turn your back and run away
Tear filled eyes frail like a child
Waves of confusion pass
Like the cold air in your lungs
Dreaming of warmth in a diffrent place
Each direction you turn this cold path awaits
Ice become your heart
As you flee a new direction
But you see the top and regret becomes sin
Your life lays wanting
Feet sinking in the snow
In the space between a blink and a tear
You pass to the bottom
__________________________________________________ ____
Hate to do these all in one post....but i didnt want to do three diffrent ones...anyways...ill be getting around to yours in the next few days, so look at mine :=)