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Mr.Plague
06-20-2005, 10:10 PM
"Aria of Sorrow"

There was no thought in the decisions I made, there was no regret in all the wrongdoings I made/What I did, I didn't know it could change the course of time, what I thought I didn't know/Behold the power of my thought, Behold the wrath that I wraught, it was wrong/When I see you, I can read it in your eyes, When I see you, we can be together/When I see you, I know it's not my fault, When I see you, we can be here forever.

I heard the news late last night, the accident that silenced you/ It seemed like life flashed before my eyes, I just don't know what to do/Why did you strand me on the lonesome and cold Earth, I wanted to always be by your side/But now since you died, who am I to look for to confide/Why the **** did you have to leave me behind.

Now since our bonds have long since been broken, yet my final words havce yet been spoken/One day look for me, i'll again cross your eyes/One day look for me, but please don't cry.

Now that sadness sank in my blood, I hope you always confide my love/To me there will be no tommorrow, as I stay here singing my Aria of Sorrow/ As I Stay for you.

(ugh, my songs have vastly improved)

I-cant-sing
06-20-2005, 10:14 PM
"Aria of Sorrow"

(ugh, my songs have vastly improved)
if you really think so :thumb:

Mr.Plague
06-20-2005, 10:15 PM
Is that sarcasm?

I-cant-sing
06-20-2005, 10:25 PM
dont get me wrong mate, but that song needs some serious work. You overuse words, and that gets really annoying to listen to, believe me.

Mr.Plague
06-21-2005, 10:40 AM
well yeah, I know that, I wrote this like three years ago

Kurrpt
06-21-2005, 10:41 AM
dam u!!


stealing the title from one of my favorite gameboy games


you bastard!! <shakes fist>

Mr.Plague
06-21-2005, 10:58 AM
hahaha, I know, castlevania

Kurrpt
06-21-2005, 10:58 AM
that game fukking rules.....

my bro lost my copy :upset:

HypnotiQSorcerer
06-21-2005, 01:05 PM
dude this is not bad...
i dunno how it compares to your current work
but this is not that bad
maybe if you tweak it it now
it can def be workable,

i like it

Mr.Plague
06-21-2005, 08:49 PM
thanks, I have actually revised it many times to rid of the repetivness, and I took out some parts that had no real meaning to the storyline