Cant come up with a title

[reno_af]

What do you guys think?

v1
I take back everything I said
I didn’t know what I was doing
Your memory won’t leave my head
I can’t undo what was done
Now alone I stand
The loneliness has begun
My happiness equals none

Chorus
Don’t leave I just can’t take it
Your heart is sore, I know
I didn’t mean to break it
Please come back
And ill make it all worthwhile
Return to me
So I can see your smile

v2
My love is on trial
But I can’t prove reasonable doubt
I didn’t mean to do it
I didn’t mean to shout
Now guilty I stand
Day in and day out

Chorus
Don’t leave I just can’t take it
Your heart is sore, I know
I didn’t mean to break it
Please come back
And I’ll make it all worthwhile
Return to me
So I can see your smile

[heavilymixedx666]

im just throwing out ideas here but...

Love on trial

The toll of lonliness

Come back

Without you

Infinate sorrow

i dotn know thats what i coudl come up with great song..Definatley pop. But thats not bad. its ready for music now.

[SixStringKing]

...i personally did not like it..i thought it was cliche and shallow
on the otherhand
many people would like it and it would make a good simple plan esque song

feel free to crit mine

[Manson0101]

im thinking "return to me" simply cause for me, that seems to be the idea the whole song revolves around. if the song works for you and your sound i say go for it.

[Mr.Plague]

I agree with SixStringKing

[HypnotiQSorcerer]

I'd title it trial by loneliness

this is real good
you should add more trial imagery
and add another verse
but seriousl dude

i dig it man
make a nice medium rock progression

[reno_af]

I appreciate the title suggestions guys, but i was really trying to get comments and suggestions on the song itself