JaveryAM
06-19-2005, 08:31 AM
You might notice that this piece was also used in the Challenge 89
I just need some crits for it
Walk Away
Verse:
In her cloak, like a silhouette
She glides on the street and dodges passing cars
As concealing as she can be, she fades into the black
Her figure's lost among the shadows
And she travels on among the unpaved road
Trying desperately not to be noticed
The sirens mark the oncoming traffic
Those opposers who detest her, blind with fury
Encroaching, nearer, closer to her destination
Bridge:
On those streets, she has been for a while
Chorus:
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Believe you weren't there
Those events last night
Had never taken place
And you can leave guilt-free
It happened on its own
So why are you hiding?
Why are you running away?
Verse:
He tries again to plead for help
Left lost, to die upon a shelf
Crying, moaning towards the blood stained walls
Scream louder, still, and maybe they
Will hear his yells as they recieve
All the messages he screams in vain
She left him behind to live alone
And figured he'd find his way home
But he just lays there like a lame duck
Bridge:
And no one's coming there to rescue him
Chorus:
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Believe you weren't there
Those events last night
Had never taken place
And you can leave guilt-free
It happened on its own
So why are you hiding?
Why are you running away?
Interlude:
While he's suffering
She's walking away
While he's dying
She's ignoring him
As she survives
He's giving up all hope
While she's alive
He's laying down to die
The trail of her essence has descended upon his wounds
Those tiresome eyes have wandered so far from him
And she makes not attempt at turning back
Chorus:
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Believe you weren't there
Those events last night
Had never taken place
And you can leave guilt-free
It happened on its own
So why are you hiding?
Why are you running away?
Outro:
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Nothing ever happened
Why are you running away?
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Nothing ever happened
Why are you running away?
Why are you running
Away
I just need some crits for it
Walk Away
Verse:
In her cloak, like a silhouette
She glides on the street and dodges passing cars
As concealing as she can be, she fades into the black
Her figure's lost among the shadows
And she travels on among the unpaved road
Trying desperately not to be noticed
The sirens mark the oncoming traffic
Those opposers who detest her, blind with fury
Encroaching, nearer, closer to her destination
Bridge:
On those streets, she has been for a while
Chorus:
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Believe you weren't there
Those events last night
Had never taken place
And you can leave guilt-free
It happened on its own
So why are you hiding?
Why are you running away?
Verse:
He tries again to plead for help
Left lost, to die upon a shelf
Crying, moaning towards the blood stained walls
Scream louder, still, and maybe they
Will hear his yells as they recieve
All the messages he screams in vain
She left him behind to live alone
And figured he'd find his way home
But he just lays there like a lame duck
Bridge:
And no one's coming there to rescue him
Chorus:
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Believe you weren't there
Those events last night
Had never taken place
And you can leave guilt-free
It happened on its own
So why are you hiding?
Why are you running away?
Interlude:
While he's suffering
She's walking away
While he's dying
She's ignoring him
As she survives
He's giving up all hope
While she's alive
He's laying down to die
The trail of her essence has descended upon his wounds
Those tiresome eyes have wandered so far from him
And she makes not attempt at turning back
Chorus:
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Believe you weren't there
Those events last night
Had never taken place
And you can leave guilt-free
It happened on its own
So why are you hiding?
Why are you running away?
Outro:
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Nothing ever happened
Why are you running away?
Walk away
Like nothing ever happened
Nothing ever happened
Why are you running away?
Why are you running
Away