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El_Goodo
06-18-2005, 04:09 PM
Today I'm free,
Free to be anything I want,
Yes today I'm free,
Free to see anythign I want,

Yes today Im free,
But there's nowhere I'd rather be,
Than chained down to the ground right next to you,
ya there's nothing I wouldn't do,

Today I'm free,
yesterday I thought I'd never be,
Yes today I'm free,
and there's nothing I can't see,

Yes today Im free,
But there's nowhere I'd rather be,
Than chained down to the ground right next to you,
ya there's nothing I wouldn't do,

Yesterday I thought I was free,
But now I know that until your with me,
I'll never be...,
No I'll never ne free

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Simple song inspired by Bob Dylan and John Lennon.

You can listen to it Here (http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=354233)

apocalypseNOW
06-18-2005, 04:20 PM
i thought it was okay. of course ntohing spectacular. i thought it got to reptitive. it is simple as you said so not much to critique. a little bit to simple for me. simple isnt bad though.