Opinions on Metal track

[Accentopus]

Please Check this out
This is more suited to MX'ers with heavier taste

http://www.soundclick.com/blindsitetheory

Just afew sentences on what you think. 5 minutes of your time

Thanks in advance

Chris

[Accentopus]

Leave a link and I will return a critique

[FUBARGNV]

AWEOMNESS:

the vocals are soo omg.. so awesome... i cant tell what your saying but i dont care.. its soo good.... although you could use your voice for other than screaming maybe a back up singer... would be wierd.. but soo awesome lol

guitar is very good.. im liking the riffs... im not a guitarist myself but they sounded good enough... good use of the 2nd guitar too

drums rock.... enuf said...

guitar solo was good... if played faster and over a heavier section of the song.... would be soo much more pumping...


improvements:

the transition at 15 seconds is bad... make a smoother one... then it would be so much heavier

bit wierd to interpret the actualll format of the song... the verses ( i think at the start kinda got lost at the end)




8.5/10 and im guessing at a live show this would rock so much harder....



http://www.mp3.com.au/ltk

if you could check us out... and just write a review in here much appreciated...

both songs if you could.. but "black hearts" preferably...

[Accentopus]

Yeah i will check that out

Thanks alot for the kind comments

[FUBARGNV]

no worrys... what do you play in that band???

and btw i hope you take all them as constructive... ;)

any feedback??

[Accentopus]

The First song was at abit sloppy at times. It had some good elements and when the main riffs kicked in it was stronger. The Second Song, Black Hearts was stronger. It had a very strong riff on about 25 seconds. I liked it. the vocals perhaps needed to be stronger, the tone was fairly good but more powerful cutting vocals would improve the song, work on that and your voice will improve. The guitar was good work, as was the drumming. Keep working at it

Chris

[wicked_child]

good song. here's the only negative comments from me:

it's kinda repetitive on the first few parts and second, change the tone of the drums. overall, its a good metal song.

[FUBARGNV]

The First song was at abit sloppy at times. It had some good elements and when the main riffs kicked in it was stronger. The Second Song, Black Hearts was stronger. It had a very strong riff on about 25 seconds. I liked it. the vocals perhaps needed to be stronger, the tone was fairly good but more powerful cutting vocals would improve the song, work on that and your voice will improve. The guitar was good work, as was the drumming. Keep working at it

I play bass and sing in that band. The format is supposed to be slightly different to standard metal. Anyway...Thanks

Chris

thanks for the comments... we improved the songs slightly ;)

nice... youve got a good sound coming out neway.. keep rocking

[Phototropic]

Pretty darn good

The band were very tight

The vocals weren't something I would listen to, but you guys know what your doing

Keep it up :thumb:

[ThrashHead]

Loved everything.. but the throat I didn't care for much. It was good 3.5/5

[_bombsh3ll_]

good stuff man!

[Accentopus]

Any more crits. Thanks in advance

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[My Sweet Oblivion]

Interesting vocals... Sounds very reptilian... Don't really care for it at all besides it's unique sound... Good music though, pretty tight.

3/5

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[jking3002]

Those vocs are crazy, very different sounding from anything else out there, sounds like it might hurt. Pretty nice really. The vocs might need to be a little deeper.