Doomrider original track(reviews wanted)

[Doomrider]

Hi!!

This is a track made as an escape situation in a RPG game.
Some might feel that it fits as "total obliteration" but trust me, if that were the case, the track would be much more brutal and dark.

Time is running out (http://www.thedoomrider.com/The%20mixed/Time%20is%20running%20out.mp3 )

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[drummerman]

It sounds really cool, perfect for a game.

[Dancin' Man]

Well, I like the tone of the chord guitars a lot but I hate the lead guitar tone. The synth-y solo bits I really dislike, too electronic sounding, not raw enough. I also don't like the techno feel of the song, although I suppose that was what you were going for. I'd recommend less electronics and more natural sounds. Also the drums were quite boring. I know most people won't notice the drum parts unless they really pop out but try something a little more stylish with some jazz drumming mixed it. Use the drums to accentuate the parts. Also spicing up the rhythm guitar part willl keep it more interesting. I wish the dynamic changed more in this song because will speed and mood changes plus a more raw sound you could have a great song. Nice work overall.

[Trivium]

I like the sound your trying to achieve and you do it well, its a good song, though some parts are buzzy and can get a little annoying, overall good job.