[Progressive metal]The Alpha & Omega

[Dancin' Man]

Well, here is my new song. I've been working on it for a couple days and this is it without any vocals.

http://www.myspace.com/thealphaandomega

A Building is the title. I'd love to see some feedback and would be more than happy to give your music some as well.

I JUST UPDATED THE SONG. RERECORDED SECTIONS AND REWROTE THE WHOLE LAST HALF. ALSO ADDED VOCALS.

This isn't a stupid bump, more just one so that I don't have to start a new thread.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/thealphaandomega_music.htm

Can also be found there

[Doomrider]

I am sorry to have to say this but in my oppinion this isnt very good.("man is god")
It sounds like one big out of tune/beat guitars bad vocal(if you would want to call that vocal) jam.
The best part is the accustic guitar part, how come the sounds is much better in those parts?
There arent any big changes or really good parts, I dont mean to be rough on you but
it sounds to like you have a long ways to go.
There arent really any interessting parts, only the accustic parts.
The sound needs alot of work to.
The basic thought from my view is that this isnt a pro in action.

"Dream music"
Hmm, this one was more interessting, you are very good at making accustic parts, you got a good feeling here.
The guitar harrasment in this one is actually a little interessting, its nothing I would buy but it is different , you should still tune your electric guitar.
maybe you could make something good if you structured the "guitar harrasment" more with the accustic parts.
The sound here also need work.

"A building"
Nice start, but the drums are interfering, this might be what you feel is experimenting but I dont like it.
The electric guitar is really not working here, the sound sucks.
And here too the electric guitar in not in tune.
Sounds like you often have problem staying in beat, keep practicing, and on recordings, use more time!
That solo/riff thing at 4 or so is really crappy, TUNE your guitar and use more takes to get it right.



-This was probably not the kind of review you were hoping for but I hope that my honesty can help you in future recordings, but if you are happy with your music the way it is just keep doing what you are doing, it all comes down to what you like and want to hear and create.

Review me at: http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=347728

Doomrider;=

[Dancin' Man]

Thanks a lot for that! I'll be sure to check out your stuff.

[freestyle1k86]

The drumming is weak. Just lower the volume on the drummer a bit, and get rid of all that hi-hatidge.

[Dancin' Man]

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[Glass Onion]

The vocals completly spoil what you had going.

[chaosMK]

I didnt think it was that bad. The recording quality isnt the best, for example I could barely hear the bass throughout it, but that is pretty easy to improve on.

The vocals kind of ruin the first piece, partially because they went in real loud and everything else seemed to be pulled down some.

I liked the mellown and ambient progressions of the second two. My favorite was probably "A Building."

My only suggestion would be to speed up the changes some and avoid too much repetition (unless you add some vocals in). Sometimes the audience can wander off during epics.

[Dancin' Man]

http://www.myspace.com/thealphaandomega

A Building is the song I'd really like peopel to focus on. I recently redid the whole second half and added vocals. I think it's a big step up.

Just leave me a link and I'll be sure to check out your music.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/thealphaandomega_music.htm

Can also be found there

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