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Sugar Chestnut
05-29-2005, 09:11 PM
I know this is so ****ty and cliche and im just getting started, but im just trying to get these ideas out, give me some advice how to fix it and continue it...

An abomination you couldnt touch
With disregard for what you've done
I'm on my way out and i dont ask for much
Just a pen, paper and a loaded gun

I can taste the hate, but who's is for
My mother who's halfway out the door
No we know it sure as hell aint her
Its the bitch who's about to hit the floor

eleven years old, her heads through the wall
at sixteen she's hiding the scars cause she's mauled
By eighteen mommy's gonna get the call
Little girl found a way to end it all.

Sugar Chestnut
05-29-2005, 09:48 PM
WHY IS NO ONE READING THIS... IS IT INVISIBLE? What the funk, i have work at 7 am (on friggin memorial day) and i wanted to get some feedback before i go to bed. SOMEone please...