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NoHero9
05-28-2005, 01:53 AM
This is a song I wrote for my band, Maelstrom. The band is fashioned after megadeth. This song doesnt have a whole lot of lyrics, as I wrote way too much music for it, but what I have I like, and I hope you do, too. :thumb:

Plague: this song is about god striking back for the foolish things that humans do. That's if you didn't know that's what plagues are.

With words spoken with twisted tongues,
winds of death to fill your lungs,
A curse to fill you with disease,
A plague to bring all to thier knees,
A million lives in a thoughtless trance,
and fires to begin the whipping dance,
Totured people writhe in pain,
while many more will soon be slain.

and the lives of the world will be lost to the flame,
sacrelidge and blasphemy set the stage today,
and the rulers of the world will surely lose thier minds,
as the creator destroy everything,
and just leaves us behind.

It's disturbing to think what we will do to survive,
when everyone around is struggling just to stay alive.

the end of days is upon us,
Its now,
we must overcome this plague, somehow.

NoHero9
05-28-2005, 02:09 AM
dammit, maybe a bump could do some damage...you dont have to like it, just look at it...im bored.

xKONRADx
05-28-2005, 02:25 AM
No.

NoHero9
05-28-2005, 02:29 AM
dont worry, i have more. and this isnt supposed to seem so black metallish, its got some good music, thats the important thing. bad criticism is welcome, it will not change my opinion though.

DeadReligion
05-28-2005, 02:39 PM
I love it...10/10...

Deception
05-28-2005, 03:10 PM
Even though it's not really my type of music, I absolutely love this little bit you have shared with us all. I like the word choice, and how the ryhming doesn't seem forced, but natural. I'm interested to hear the music behind this bad boy too. Maybe you could upload it sometime?

My rating: 9.5/10

Please crit my song too if you would please! Thanks.
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=346411

NoHero9
05-28-2005, 06:19 PM
Thank you so much for your critiques, I would upload the music, but I dont have a microphone on my computer, but if i find a way, I definitely will.

NoHero9
05-29-2005, 06:53 PM
I think that this did rather well, but slipped through the cracks too soon, I shall formally bump this now.