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fingers07
05-27-2005, 06:15 PM
Hey Guys came up with a new song again.. its ok at the moment just need some help adjustin it.. feel free to crit away and leave links and i will crit back
its quite short and needs more


it could never be like this
it seemed so right
all my i love i gave to you
we never thought fully things through

Are you goin to be there when i get home

Way----out there
thats were i will be
ho---ping for you
to come back to me

and your never comin back
and i dont mind
a love like this
its too hard too find

YouGottaBeCrazy
05-27-2005, 09:25 PM
Simple and to the point. A bit weezer-ish. I like it. :thumb:

VivaLaSam461
06-05-2005, 06:28 PM
It sucked