New Song

[FizHarris]

Hmm this is a new song I wrote for my new band. This is our 1st song. Need your comments. No title yet for this piece and would like your suggestions/opinions for a title. Thank You

I close my eyes
To see the beautiful picture
And feel the tranquility
But when I open my eyes
I see hypocrisy
A massive agony

I wonder who I can trust
In this world full of betrayal
And full of lies
You think you can bring us down
But you’re wrong!
We’re going to rise and
prove you wrong!

Believe in us
We’ll fight till the end
Victory for us
We raise our hands

The anger
The hatred
The power
The insanity

Retribution is what you’ll get
To all imbeciles
Say your last prayers
Now face the fire!

Believe in us
We’ll fight till the end
Victory for us
We raise our hands

[malaki157]

Cool, reminds me a little of Lamb of god from ruin "The anger The hatred The power The insanity" but he says "I'll show you all that I have mastered, fear, pain, hatered, power - this is the art of ruin" -lol- anyway my suggestion for a title would be - well I have a couple I guess if it were me.. It would help if I knew the music but "A world in gods hands" or "Beautiful World"