live_metal_die_metal
05-26-2005, 05:48 PM
Again, just another song. Crit for crit, post your song in here if you want me to crit it, any reccommendations are appreciated to this song
Silence.
Living life off in the shadows
Having the voice which remains unheard
Drifting through life as if invisible
Silence is the sound...
The only sound that has ever occured...
The voices i hear talk to me
But i cannot talk back
The voices i hear talk to me
Peace in my mind...
Is something that i lack...
The silent screams in my head..
Are waiting to be heard..
The voices scream to me
In my darkened thoughts,
I can tell if this is a dream or reality
The voices scream to me,
But are left to be unheard
Losing grip of whats left in sanity
Hearing voices from miles away
Never knowing what to say
Not even to this day.
The silenced screams fill my mind
The silent thoughts in my head..
Are waiting to be done..
Silence.
Living life off in the shadows
Having the voice which remains unheard
Drifting through life as if invisible
Silence is the sound...
The only sound that has ever occured...
The voices i hear talk to me
But i cannot talk back
The voices i hear talk to me
Peace in my mind...
Is something that i lack...
The silent screams in my head..
Are waiting to be heard..
The voices scream to me
In my darkened thoughts,
I can tell if this is a dream or reality
The voices scream to me,
But are left to be unheard
Losing grip of whats left in sanity
Hearing voices from miles away
Never knowing what to say
Not even to this day.
The silenced screams fill my mind
The silent thoughts in my head..
Are waiting to be done..