Skizzzo
05-09-2005, 10:15 PM
K, so I have a song that sounds a lot like tool so I needed lyrics that matched the song. I kind of like it?
If you critisize, please change some words around.
Its aura entices...
forcing me to push on
it will lure
it will vice
it will steal my inside
My demise.... will prolong
Her whole body emits
A smooth tenderness
I cannot
I will not
Foolishly Fall for this ficticious Bliss (i don't like this line)
But her lips show no sign Of release over time
I'm the captured, the weak, and the opressed.
It slowly grows larger with each inhale of breath.
I want it, I need it, It calls out to me.
My curse, a heart, Will only mislead
This one way love created ends in tragedy.(I don't like this line)
Not done, only beggining
Sorry for really crappy emo ****, my songs aren't usually like this.
If you critisize, please change some words around.
Its aura entices...
forcing me to push on
it will lure
it will vice
it will steal my inside
My demise.... will prolong
Her whole body emits
A smooth tenderness
I cannot
I will not
Foolishly Fall for this ficticious Bliss (i don't like this line)
But her lips show no sign Of release over time
I'm the captured, the weak, and the opressed.
It slowly grows larger with each inhale of breath.
I want it, I need it, It calls out to me.
My curse, a heart, Will only mislead
This one way love created ends in tragedy.(I don't like this line)
Not done, only beggining
Sorry for really crappy emo ****, my songs aren't usually like this.