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kiros_music
05-09-2005, 04:19 PM
This song isn't completelt finished and every time I try to write about something different. It is kind of hard. OK so I need major suggestions for this one.

Pills and Pain

What did you give me
This stuff you call medicine
What’s supposed to make me better
Only makes me worse
You pour it in a tea spoon
You place it on my tongue
Slowly I start to feel worse and worse
This isn’t my fate
Got to fight it
Got to stay awake
What’s supposed to make me better
Only makes me worse

Why do they call it medicine
Just cause it comes in a prescribed tin
Packed in little pills
Is the thing that kills
Drink it up
Down it goes
Don’t fall a sleep
I won’t wake up

Supposed to stop the pain
It’s driving me insane
Blisters on my hands
Start to form
These pills make my skin crawl
Or it just seems like it
Starting to see things
That I’m not supposed to see
Hallucinations are making me crazy
Make it stop make it stop
It’s never gonna stop it’s never gonna stop
Take me away someone make it end

Why do they call it medicine
Just cause it comes in a prescribed tin
Packed in little pills
Is the thing that kills
Drink it up
Down it goes
Don’t fall a sleep
I won’t wake up

(This part starts loud then gets really softer until you cant hear it and the song just ends)

Packed in pills
Is this thing that’s kills
Packed in pills
Is this thing that’s kills
Packed in pills
Is this thing that’s kills
Packed in pills
Is this thing that’s KILLS

(Scream kills loud and then end the song)

kiros_music
05-09-2005, 07:11 PM
come on guys crit this u crit me i crit u