Words you don’t believe, and words that don’t matter

[eyeless_dk_]

Words you don’t believe, and words that don’t matter
Hi guys
I've posted this one before, but I didn't get alot of replies... I've changed a couple of thing like totally rewriting the chorus, and a couple of other things and I just wanted to hear your opinion on it.
But I would also like you to check it for grammatical faults cause English isn’t my first language.
Of cause I’ll give you crits on your stuff if you crit mine. But I’m not sure how much help I’ll be


Words you don’t believe, and words that don’t matter(I'll presumably change this, it just fitted the first layout very well, but now it seem pretty misplaced)

Verse 1
She ain’t as pretty when she falls from grace
So dirty and helpless when facade breaks
She has always been belle of the ball
But now I know that even angels fade away


Chorus
we’re all one winged angels
That need to embrace each other to fly
But my wings are yet to unfold
And we both crash to the ground

verse 2
I am nothing but a waste of your time
I just wish you would waste me forever
You have me going on sixes and sevens
But you are the horizon and out of reach

Bridge
And I love you
With a rope around your neck
When autumn turns to winter storms
And your corky eyes turns into black

Verse 3
every snowflake has an unique shape
And beautifully hover
But from first to last they are cold in my face
Melt in the sun and turn to water

chorus

Outtro
And all that’s left is the shattered frame
from the potrait of you and I

[LittlePound]

pretty good, i like the metaphors, seems good to me i like how like half of it's positive and then mixed with negative to counter it. What exactly is it about though, is about you, someone you know or what?

[eyeless_dk_]

it's about a relationship that ended, pretty common theme:-)

[eyeless_dk_]

come on.
Have no one anything to say?