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sinkman
05-09-2005, 03:56 PM
Ok so yeah, written for my absoloutley wonderful girlfriend. I'm worried they're not good enough for her.

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V1:
Just who do you think you are?
To show up in my dreams
It's a difficult thing
As simple as it seems
And when I come awake,
Will you be on the floor?
We've been searching through the world,
Simply looking for something more

V2:
Everyone be quiet (music stops)
I can hear the sound (Music starts, haha I personally found this kinda funny)
From a thousand miles away
I can hear you hit the ground
And when I come awake,
Are you with me on the floor?
We've been looking for so long,
Unclear what we're looking for (into prechorus 1 which goes like this:)
Months ago I couldn't see me
Now I know exactly where I wanna be (Trust me, it sounds fine, just the lyrics are a little ****ty)

V3:
Steady and quiet,
Alone in our beds
The worst kind of thoughts
Trickle through our heads
And in wishing we didn't have
These stories to tell
About twisted ****ing creeps
That made our lives a ****ing hell
This serenity passes
Into a moment of grace
And shines on the moment
I see your shining face
So when I come awake
And your with me on the floor
The way you make my heart beat
I've found it's what I'm living for

PC:2
We need to get out of here even if just for a while
I've come to find this world is just too small for your smile

Chorus:
And we can way away into a pitch black sun
Burn the letters that call us to where were from
And catch this dust off a falling star
And be for once happy to be where we are
And we can way away into a pitch black sun
Burn the letters that call us to where were from
And catch this dust off a falling star
And be for once happy to be who we are

Cuz I know I am

punkdrums
05-09-2005, 06:04 PM
i like it, its very Robert Smith

sinkman
05-09-2005, 06:32 PM
Thanks very much, I dunno who Robert Smith is, but oh well

BassPlayer222
05-09-2005, 07:34 PM
cure frontman, great lyricist.

I think it is pretty well written. im a big fan of love songs my self. I like the whole black sun metaphore....makes it kinda unique....i think you should show it to your girlfriend, she might understand it better....but dont' tell her it's about her

sinkman
05-10-2005, 02:24 PM
I already have and haven't told her it's about her, but why do you say?

Kyle
05-10-2005, 02:29 PM
written for my absoloutley wonderful girlfriend. I'm worried they're not good enough for her.
Jesus christ you can't be serious

sinkman
05-10-2005, 07:06 PM
Im a ****in creep

sinkman
05-11-2005, 02:07 PM
Ok so this is just a bump, but it's the first and last becaue I already gave them to her so now I just wanna hear what people think.