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Camel42
04-30-2005, 02:29 AM
Can you please tell me if this song GD sucks? I think it does.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/hambergmusic.htm
oogaboogabooga
04-30-2005, 09:28 AM
the link doesn't work, if thats anything to go by....
BeforeForever12
04-30-2005, 12:27 PM
I think it's pretty kick ***...
cramboli
04-30-2005, 04:07 PM
yeah it doesn't suck.
AntiSpicuzza
04-30-2005, 05:12 PM
I didn't really like it. It's not bad tho.
King
05-01-2005, 04:22 PM
it doesn't SUCK, but it's kind of fruity
gtarriff
05-01-2005, 07:42 PM
I didn't care too much for it but it's not my type of music.
Easyblue
05-02-2005, 11:05 AM
yes
Gackt
05-02-2005, 11:15 AM
it was ok... not my thing tho
TwentyTwo
05-02-2005, 06:58 PM
it doesn't suck.
in the middle, the song kind of changes and it sounded really cut and didn't flow that well. try to work on the flow...if you can make it smooth, it'll sound much better.
mcarlson11
05-02-2005, 07:18 PM
way to repeditive ImO
SuperTerrorizor
05-02-2005, 07:23 PM
Ya i kinda noticed that change as well but its not a big deal Good Work on the song sounds good to me
knockwurst_myband
05-02-2005, 09:35 PM
I didn't care too much for it but it's not my type of music.
grr for stealing my avatar :evil: n/p though

anyway, as for the song...................way to sketchy and could have dont without the load of distortion, its good sometimes but overkill is bad.......
SavestheDay7432
05-03-2005, 02:04 PM
This doesn't suck but..

This song sounds like it belongs in Baywatch.
BleedNoMore666
05-03-2005, 05:25 PM
Dzamn. Thats not that bad. It doesn't suck. Its pretty good.

:thumb:
deathscreamingsheep
05-04-2005, 03:44 PM
It's got some hooks I'll give you that. It's kinda upbeat, and although we can get the mood, we can't really tell you all about the song until we here some vocals man.
sk8t1228
05-04-2005, 03:59 PM
It's very repetitive. I don't like it as an instrumental song. Add some vocals and you're going somewhere.
PainKiller8191
05-09-2005, 07:01 AM
no lyrics?

lol are those midi drums:)? how cute
jaygriggs
05-09-2005, 06:39 PM
your song sounds pretty good, has some simple but great sounding riffs, i do tend to think though it could do with a little more guitar harmonising in it to give it a bit more of life and take out some of the monotomy, or maybe even slow down the timing of the song to change the mood and epicness to the nature of the song, but all in all a not too shabby song
Camel42
05-10-2005, 08:49 PM
no lyrics?

lol are those midi drums:)? how cute

I was asking about the song it self; not the SR.

Yeah they are midi drums. Since the song is conceptial and not being preformed by my band there are no lyrics and the guitars are recorded by D/I on my 4 track in my bed room.

I just want opinions on the structure, harmonies, melodies, rhythms, hooks, the chorus, originality, and things of that nature.

My biggest concern about the song is that after the first pre-chorus the songs timing is thrown off by 2 beats until the chorus, but if no one else heard it then its cool I guess.
millencolin1234
05-11-2005, 04:57 AM
lyrics lyrics and lyrics and thats a prety decent song!!!
chimp_spanner
05-11-2005, 06:51 AM
Hey nothing wrong with MIDI drums ;) I use them all the time. It's DFHS mind you so it does sound like God's (Tomas Haake's) drumkit. Hehe. Anyway, been a while since I heard the ol SC drums. Gotta love the rock kit.

Hm, well it didn't suck. Some really good ideas in there. Especially liked the Ramstein (can't spell it) style break down roughly halfway through. Some interesting harmonies too. Kind of unexpected/non-obvious chords, reminds me in a way of some of the stuff Cave In use!

Guess the main criticism is that the two guitar parts don't seem very tight in places. At one point they're both playing like a beat, or half a beat apart, both doing seperate things. Unless there's some sort of pattern or rule in place for why the two seperate guitars are doing seperate things (like...one follows the kick, the other plays on the offbeat, stuff like that), it's probably best to keep the phrasing similar-to-identical, but ya know, still have them playing different notes and creating cool harmonies and stuff. Otherwise it just sounds kinda random and sloppy.

Also, the fact that the song doesn't really deviate from one key gives the impression of being repetitive, when actually there are quite a few different riffs in there. It does seem to just centre around one note, so maybe come up with a new section to counter the rest of the song?

Anyway, keep it up. I think the song has potential. Very "anthemic" if that's how it's spelt. Look forward to hearin more!

- P