Forgiving Ways-Young Guitar Player

[AreaaGatur51]

Hello all musicians,
I have posted messages in this form, well actually I usually post in this more than other places on the site. But havent shown you my work, this is because I am only thirteen and just started playing. I just wrote my first song I named in forgiving ways just because I felt like it. I just started to take lessons 3 weeks ago i have had 3 lessons. This I wrote on my own for fun. Please crit and thanks ahead of time.

http://www.purevolume.com/daddyspajamas

The song once again is called Forgiving Things.

[AreaaGatur51]

Anyone?

[Lazy Beggar]

well it sounds ok, I found it didnt sound very continious. I mean it didn't seem to come together well, perhaps other people with more knowledge than I have will be able to help more on that. Other than that it sounded pretty good for only 3 weeks of learning.

[AreaaGatur51]

Thanks, I understand what you mean. I recorded that last week and Ive played it alot more times over the weekend, so Ive gotten better at it and made it smoother Ill record it again in a little later when I have time. Thanks!

Anyone else?

[AreaaGatur51]

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[AreaaGatur51]

please give me suggestions... anyone?

[AreaaGatur51]

No one? ok fine ill stop bumping.. sorry if this bothers you ill stop.