"Just Breathe" by Sudden State of Amnesia

[Merker]

I guess this song could be classified as a pop punk song. Give me some feedback on it if you could. click on the link to download it. http://s9.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=05VJBSX165N861L7SMU8GLQS2P

[Sil3nce]

I like it, but the vocals are a little to quiet in the verses especially. The guitar playing is great, the lyrics are great, its just that one thing so i give it a 8 out of 10.

[Merker]

I like it, but the vocals are a little to quiet in the verses especially. The guitar playing is great, the lyrics are great, its just that one thing so i give it a 8 out of 10.

thanx, like i said it was done on my computer so it wasn't gonna be the best quality but i'm glad to hear that you like it. i've got more songs that i will put on here after people give me more reviews on this one

[Zahgon]

Congratulations on a real nice song. It kinda stuck in my head and I had to go back and listen to it again. I guess the only criticism I might give is I would consider shortening it by 30 seconds or so since the last part seemed to meander ever so slightly. If you change nothing though, it's still a great song. I would definitely like to hear your other songs and a better produced version of this song, if you ever get the means. Good job!

[Merker]

Congratulations on a real nice song. It kinda stuck in my head and I had to go back and listen to it again. I guess the only criticism I might give is I would consider shortening it by 30 seconds or so since the last part seemed to meander ever so slightly. If you change nothing though, it's still a great song. I would definitely like to hear your other songs and a better produced version of this song, if you ever get the means. Good job!

Thank you for reviewing my song. I'll take the shortening into consideration. idk for some reason all of my songs are like 4 to 5 minutes long i guess i just love to put a lot into them, but shortening them would definintely be an option. anyways i will put another song up soon so look for the name "Sudden State of Amnesia" in here sometime soon.

[DMB_]

make a purevolume page....looks sooo much better.

[cramboli]

yeah very catchy and more of a punk band doing something more mellow, except for the low voice in the verses id give it an 8.5/10