Rose

[mosher902]

Love acoustic song

Once i knew i girl
who was worth more than any pearl
she was beutiful
beyond comparision
and was smarter than
any samaritan


Rose
your so sharp but delicate
you hold my heart
with hope
and don't think that time will be the end
there's still all these letters to send

and her eyes
looked like saphires
with hair red
like a bonfire
she was so shy
but a part of me died
when we said goodbye

Rose
your so sharp but delicate
you hold my heart with hope
and don't think that this is the end
there's still so many letters to send
I won't stop looking
won't stop searching
till you love me
my heart is locked and you've
got the key

i never told you my feelings
but i could never be so deciving
won't i ever stop believing
that you felt the same
and i know it sounds like shame
but this uncertainty is driving me insane.

needs alot of work
but could be a decent song i think please crit