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YouGottaBeCrazy
04-24-2005, 10:52 PM
If I could wear a mask
I could just sit back
Watch the others move
And feel there's nothing to lose
I'd feel right at home
Like the shelter of a dome
I'd never be hurt again
I would be happy then

Counted Out
04-24-2005, 11:30 PM
Simple, but the meaning is easily seen, good job.

YouGottaBeCrazy
04-25-2005, 06:49 AM
thanks