Suicidal Fascination

[WaitingForSomething]

alright well this all came from the top of my head, i just started writing and this is what came out. i know it needs work, so if you could, please help me out. thanks.

Suicidal Fascination

I hope this verse makes you laugh
A possible crack of a smile
But what you don't know is
I wouldn't care if you didn't
Cause that's what you mean to me

<Chorus>
TO SOME THIS IS A FIRST
And I'm willing to take the humiliation
So wrap your hands around your throat
SO I CAN LEAVE
This suicide with fascination

Don't start breathing till I say it's ok
Start screaming once you feel the pain

You hope this verse makes me cry
I'll take this time to thank you
THANK YOU FOR NOTHING
Stains the floor
Fists have made themselves a home here

<chorus>

Don't start breathing till I say it's ok
Start screaming once you feel the pain

FALL...DOWN! Like I did for you
Wrap your hands around your throat

<chorus>

Don't start breathing till I say it's ok
Start screaming once you feel the pain

To somet this isn't a first
I've already lived humiliation (once before)
My hands wrapped around your throat (CHOKE)
Left this suicide fascinated
You started breathing before "ok"
You died above me...

[mosher902]

alright well this all came from the top of my head, i just started writing and this is what came out. i know it needs work, so if you could, please help me out. thanks.

Suicidal Fascination

I hope this verse makes you laugh
A possible crack of a smile
But what you don't know is
I wouldn't care if you didn't
Cause that's what you mean to me

<Chorus>
TO SOME THIS IS A FIRST
And I'm willing to take the humiliation
So wrap your hands around your throat
SO I CAN LEAVE
This suicide with fascination

Don't start breathing till I say it's ok
Start screaming once you feel the pain

You hope this verse makes me cry
I'll take this time to thank you
THANK YOU FOR NOTHING
Stains the floor
Fists have made themselves a home here

<chorus>

Don't start breathing till I say it's ok
Start screaming once you feel the pain

FALL...DOWN! Like I did for you
Wrap your hands around your throat

<chorus>

Don't start breathing till I say it's ok
Start screaming once you feel the pain

To somet this isn't a first
I've already lived humiliation (once before)
My hands wrapped around your throat (CHOKE)
Left this suicide fascinated
You started breathing before "ok"
You died above me...

It's Bert Merkraken without the good lyrics!!!!!!

[Bub]

It's Bert Merkraken without the good lyrics!!!!!!
Its a twat without the decency!

Seriously though, they're good lyrics, pretty fun. Not a serious view on suidice I think but not poking fun either. These are very, different, which is a great thing! The type of lyrics you'd take a quote from and put in your name on MSN, full of interwining one liners. Well done! Don't listen to this prick.
Take a look at mine? :D
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=332464
or another one
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=7660175#post7660175

[Biancazzurri]

At the beginning of reading I said that's sh!t. But I continued to read and wow, your style is so original! These are best lyrics I read on here on this week(not many though). I love this very much and nothing to add sadly...Anyways 10/10

[WaitingForSomething]

so um is it good or bad? lol im kind of confused...

[Bub]

lol good :P the chorus in particular!

[nakiwiroda]

i also think that the style is really original. First i thought that cobain might have written it outta his grave...but hey then i thought that this might be pretty good actually. And as it went on i really think that the lyrics have quite some potential with the right sound

[WaitingForSomething]

well im glad it's original, cause i dont want this suicide song to sound like every other one out there. im glad you guys like it :)