Fade (acoustic) first time singing

[Silverhammer]

this is the first time i'm singing. It's a fairly simple acoustic song i made up awhile ago and i just got the nerve to sing so i'm putting it here to get some feedback on how i did and maybe get some pointers.

http://www.geocities.com/twiginboots1221/song.html

it should be there to download.

hope you guys like it.

[myhatredinside]

well, it sounded decent. il give it to ya for actualy recording yourself instead of saying your going to one day. the only problem is, you need to eather sing louder, or sing closer to the mic. maybe get a program and record the acoustic. then over lay the vocals ontop.

[Silverhammer]

thanks. all i have is windows movie maker and sound recorder that the computer came with and a little mic, very sorry for the lack of quality. here are the words if you can't hear them in the song.

Well never come again
You thought this has changed, my love, for me
My darling you know if you cause so much pain like that
I know you know, I know you know who I am and how I know
All about that night and how that goes
With all my life, you have to know
That I love you so much more than these words can possibly say
My love, love for you,will never fade away
My love for you, my love, will never fade away my love will never fade away

i've been trying to find a program like that but haven't been successful. is there one that is a reasonbale price or some kind of free trial one on the net perhaps?

[Lazy Beggar]

I liked the singing to be honest, even if it wasn't all that clear but still I enjoyed it.

[Silverhammer]

:) thanks. i seriously just started recording at a point not caring what came out and made this off the top of my head and was mumbling a few portions. I then went back to write words that sounded close to what i was saying in there. i quite surprised that it came out the way it did. i really glad you enjoyed it though and it you need anything to be crit I’ll gladly take the time to listen/view it. thanks again.

[Metalheadcreep]

Not exactly my style, but still pretty cool, good job. :chug:

[Silverhammer]

thanks. i really didn't know what was gonna be produced once i started strumming, i just went with it and on the first try this flowed out. i'm glad you guys find it somewhat tolerable.