higher authority

[punker nicks ska]

I dont wanna rain down on your parade
all you blue boy on a police raid
but abuse of power isnt the way to solve it
flaunt your weapons talk your ****

higher authority protects you
your wall of silence draped in blue
your filthy corruption stays true
raise my one fingered fist to say ...
**** YOU!!!!!

Donut eating locust always on your asssss (how about that baby)
were all rocking steady to make sure you dont last

(i know its pretty short most of my stuff is i may have rushed this i did it in 30 min. but its only the first draft trust me i am very serious about my stuff so thanks for all the inputs i have many more that i can bore you with :naughty: )



rate it baby! :chug:

[punker nicks ska]

hey can someone give me their insights on this good or bad

[Bub]

Its...well, short, vague, uneducated and stereotypical, using buzz words for a cheer.
It seems like you believe in what you're talking about, so you can stick to it, but go for an approach that seems like you put effort into it. Songs take time

[DeadReligion]

I like the idea, the first verse is...so-so, the second verse, I love, except you put " a one" that's repetitive, probably accidental, but choose one or the other. the white bigot trash is the worst line in the song, the one after is alright. hmmm 6.8/10. Keep working on it, and yes, it is REALLY short, so, unless you are in a NOFX type band, make it longer.

[Farm girl]

its kinda short isn't it

[crasshole]

Not to be mean or anything, but it seems like it's just another street punk song about cops and how they **** over people. i give you a 4.5/10