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kiros_music
04-24-2005, 04:05 PM
I'm kind of new with thsi song writing this but can anybody help me witha catch chorus to fit the theme the song is called Hyper heres the first verse it fits with the guitars perfect

HYPER, just can't stop me
CRAZY, can't stop shaking
INSANE, just forget me

and then i need another line i no you think i'm stupid for only having this much done but you know I'm only young and my band has like 4 songs and we started two weeks ago and we don't get much practice time so I think we're doing good.