The Patriot

[Steel Sun]

:smash: Please crit for me. this is not the best but i found it out yesterday and so here it is.
Cheers :chug:


Follow my lead as i follow my heart.
Be led by the courage that tears fear apart.
Unite as one soul, join as one clan.
Follow the passion to claim back our land.
They take what is ours, force us into slaves.
The power of death to get their own ways.
I'm ready to fight, but ready to die,
Fight to be free, Take flight to the sky.

Rain in my face and wind in my hair.
Smell of my homeland writen in the air.
I will fall by my sword if i am to die.
Fight to the end, into deaths eyes.
We're prowd to be here, prowd to belong.
Stand bold in the rain and embraced by the sun.
Fight for the right, the right to be free.
Join at out spirits and follow my lead.

I am the patriot.
stone of the clan.
I am a clansman.
Fight for our land.

I am the patriot.
A soul of the clan.
I am a clansman.
Fight for our land.

Nowhere to run,
Nowhere to hide.
I'd rather die,
Than be taken alive.
so remove these dead chains,
Wash out the stains.
Bow down say a prayer.
Follow the air.

I am the patriot.
stone of the clan.
I am a clansman.
Fight for our land.

I am the patriot.
A soul of the clan.
I am a clansman.
Fight for our land.

[Steel Sun]

any1? swish

[I Love Fat women]

Horrible, ugh. 2/10. Very generic. The language wasn't necessarily bad, but the concept is very very weak.

[Steel Sun]

thanku

[Steel Sun]

v much

[Rainmaker]

can you say iron maiden and the clansman, kin hell, nice try, already been done.