squirrlemaster7
04-24-2005, 12:27 AM
i havent been writing songs for a long time iv just started acculy and i no this suck i just wanted to see if i was progressing in my lyric writing skills if that is a skill so here you go and thanks and i no he has a sucky rymeing and that it dosnt relly go anywhere it just kinnda repets it self for the frist couple verses
In the Moon Light
It’s a beautiful night tonight theirs to much going right
I got to stay awake I better not stray if I am going to do this right
Once I cross that line then I cant turn back I got to never turn back until I got to get whets coming tonight
Theirs to many things that I got to do theirs to much **** that iv gone threw and I am going to get her back tonight
Ill walk for an hour ill walk for a day I am going make this right and please lord let me get her back to night Theirs no turning back iv already gone to far I am going bye moonlight I am a lonely soul in this heart less world please lord let her be my girl and let me get her back to night
Iv reached where I need to be and she the only one there I can see she comes closer and my heart starts to shine thank you lord now she’s mine and I got her back tonight
In the Moon Light
It’s a beautiful night tonight theirs to much going right
I got to stay awake I better not stray if I am going to do this right
Once I cross that line then I cant turn back I got to never turn back until I got to get whets coming tonight
Theirs to many things that I got to do theirs to much **** that iv gone threw and I am going to get her back tonight
Ill walk for an hour ill walk for a day I am going make this right and please lord let me get her back to night Theirs no turning back iv already gone to far I am going bye moonlight I am a lonely soul in this heart less world please lord let her be my girl and let me get her back to night
Iv reached where I need to be and she the only one there I can see she comes closer and my heart starts to shine thank you lord now she’s mine and I got her back tonight