Our Song

[Ozduck]

Please listen and give advice on lyrics/singer/guitar and wateva else :)

Our Song - Click Here (http://www.ozduck.com/koc/oursong.wav)

Our song

Verse 1
Love is a powerful thing
It will raise you up high
Make you feel like a king
One emotion, such a powerful thing

Some say it’s a state of mind
just a game for two
But there is no greater love
Than mine for you

Chorus
My feelings for you are plain to see
Because love is my drug, my ecstasy
I long to hold you in my arms
The raging ocean of my heart
That only your touch commands

Verse 2
The touch of your skin
The kiss of your lips
Your beautiful face
Your curving hips

Because you are my one and only
My power, my driving glory
You drive me to write this story
Of the love only you can give me

Chorus
Instrumental break

Verse 3
No matter what you do
No matter where you go
I believe in the strength of your heart
Our love cannot be torn apart

Chorus x2

[aguywithaguitar]

it cut off after a minute. from what i heard it seemed like a nice song, and it was catchy. the singer doesn't have a very pretty voice, but it goes with the music.

[Ozduck]

any suggestions for that i can give to singer?

[Ozduck]

*bump*