A quick poem

[Algoreiom]

Too real for reality
Too strong for love
An exception in the algorythmes
Of this desolate, desperate, delicate world
Devil may care
Let god sort it out
Nobody around here cares anymore, anyway.
Hope is so easily lost today
Strain an expression in a whole new way
Sing a song to calm the soul
The time is now, or so I'm told.
Insecurities intertwined
Fuel a sharp and pacing mind
Defined and is to be a mess
My heart is hard and cracked from stress.
Too strong for love
Too real for reality
The pain is gone
When you know what you won't be.


Just wrote it. Critique thanks.

[thirdeyeblindislit]

Wow, that was actually a really good poem. I am a poem writer and I have written many but I have to say that this beats out most of my poems. That was really enjoyable. How long did it take you to write this? If something had to change, it would be the last line. I'm not sure what it is about it, but it just seems to throw off the mood of the song. But other than that, nice job. Keep it up. :thumb:

ALSO, DONT FORGET TO VOTE IN THE S&L HALL OF FAME! (that can be my crit back from you. Thanks. :thumb: )

[Algoreiom]

It took me about 5 minutes. I wrote it as I posted the thread. Because I was bored.