Not For You

[Merker]

http://s18.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=12ALSDW0J1WVOX2M54WHAZAPRK0

Please let me know what you think.

[deadendsociety66]

I thought it was good. The vocals were really good. That beginning guitar line and the fills/verse kind of sounds like a piece in one of my band's songs. But oooh well! lol Good work.

[Merker]

Cool!
What genre would you consider it to be?

[Merker]

Heres another-
http://s20.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=10Z3VPBKJK7KNS0GOH4G5DCEZ4Y

[Fatal-Division]

1st - Music was fully 100% ok., for one...tell your drummer to get a metronome to tighten up his groove..and in general the song should have been tighter...maybe a little better mixing of the instruments, certainly wasn't bad...

on the acoustic track..maybe make it a bit more sparse on all accounts....and try to push the notes a little bit more...less notes..more accented you know...the 2nd track was decent..just tighten up a bit and try a little more creativitity that's all