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I Love Fat women
04-23-2005, 12:57 PM
So, I wrote a beginning for a song in powertab, and I'm now trying to write lyrics for it. But I can't seem to make up any kind of good subject to write lyrics about for this song. Therefore, I'm gonna post the midi of the song on here to see if you guys could tell me what you think of when you hear it. Any kind of crits on the composition are very welcome aswell. I'd be happy to crit anyones lyrics who drops a comment in this thread, so please leave links in to your threads.

Heres the link to the song:

http://s22.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2546NJESU6HVF071E3OXIAL7EJ

Tell me if it gets removed and I'll reupload it.

I recorded it and uploaded it to my sound click, the quality is pretty horrible though. Anyway, here it is:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/apostatemusic.htm

AntiSpicuzza
04-23-2005, 03:00 PM
i tried, but i cant think of what topic would go with that

I Love Fat women
04-23-2005, 07:26 PM
I put it on my sound click. No bass in this version though, and the bass really ads alot to it imo.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/apostatemusic.htm

Steel Sun
04-24-2005, 11:30 AM
ur right. u do need help with this song

I Love Fat women
04-24-2005, 12:21 PM
ur right. u do need help with this song

Bitter are we?

Steel Sun
04-24-2005, 12:50 PM
swish. bitter is bitter does.

Steel Sun
04-25-2005, 12:17 PM
i wanna be i wanna be like mike but not fat....pow

DFelon204409
04-25-2005, 03:25 PM
Take this to the Audio Arena.