Camikaze
04-11-2005, 04:56 PM
Interested in helpful critique and comments, of course.
By Cameron LaFlam, 4-11-05
A Half-Empty Case of Hypnosis
Written on frayed souls
Under the harboring sun
Hypnotic rays shone through
Seven hearts conjoined as one
And from this coalition came a cause
Of much repetition and care
Which sank the floating vessel
That cursed and cleared the air
LOOK OUT BELOW, BELOW!
NOW BELLOW...
THE VITALITY WAS DRAINED
STRAIGHT FROM THE SOURCE
Capture and caress
The final mistress at sea
Delve into the deep end
And see what it means
TO INHALE THE RIPPLES
TO EXHALE THE WAVES
TO RIDE THE OCEAN’S CURRENT
AND DISCOVER TODAY
Precious plans of undying grace
Criss crossed with tales to save face
A FACE OFF, A FACE OFF
Rids the surface of animosity
By Cameron LaFlam, 4-11-05
A Half-Empty Case of Hypnosis
Written on frayed souls
Under the harboring sun
Hypnotic rays shone through
Seven hearts conjoined as one
And from this coalition came a cause
Of much repetition and care
Which sank the floating vessel
That cursed and cleared the air
LOOK OUT BELOW, BELOW!
NOW BELLOW...
THE VITALITY WAS DRAINED
STRAIGHT FROM THE SOURCE
Capture and caress
The final mistress at sea
Delve into the deep end
And see what it means
TO INHALE THE RIPPLES
TO EXHALE THE WAVES
TO RIDE THE OCEAN’S CURRENT
AND DISCOVER TODAY
Precious plans of undying grace
Criss crossed with tales to save face
A FACE OFF, A FACE OFF
Rids the surface of animosity