Need help finding music for this.

[solidsnake3725]

Ok. i made a song a while ago. and i cant find a beat or a simple rhythm. I'll post the lyrics and maybe one of you can help me out.

Verse:
Lifes a precious possesion
But it must end sometime
Times your only confession
Death is your only crime

Pre-chorus:
Compromise
Your truth dies
Agitation
Is the only confrontation

Chorus:
The premonition of danger keeps you alerted
This formidable state cannot be deserted
This apathy you are filled with empties your mind
Your death is a loss
In which you cannot find.


Thanks for any suggestions

[boyhendoghdy]

simply enough just put in your strum pattern, i just wrote some simple progressions
Ok. i made a song a while ago. and i cant find a beat or a simple rhythm. I'll post the lyrics and maybe one of you can help me out.

Verse:
Lifes a precious possesion
But it must end sometime
Times your only confession
Death is your only crime

D(XX0232)
F(XX3210)
C(X30210)
G(320001)

Pre-chorus:
Compromise
Your truth dies
Agitation
Is the only confrontation

G(320001)
D(XX0232)
Am(XX2210)
Am(XX2210)

Chorus:
The premonition of danger keeps you alerted
This formidable state cannot be deserted
This apathy you are filled with empties your mind
Your death is a loss
In which you cannot find.

D(XX0232)
D(XX0233) i'm not sure what kind of D it is
C(X32033)
G(320033)

Thanks for any suggestions

[solidsnake3725]

thanks its cool. But can u tell me what key its in? Because u have the F and the F#... i dont know if that was accidental.

[boyhendoghdy]

no, i made those 3 parts up separately, and i just stuck them into your song because they fit well enough, but if you put in a simple bridge part that pulled everything together it would sound good