Soul At Stake ( Not sure about title)

[bigskinny2006]

~Intro~
The decision to take life,
Is the decision to have ones own life taken.

~Verse
When will you become
The lust I use to feel
Intoxication so real
I will drink another to us
My restless soul now still

Inside my flesh
Is where you shall stay
Engraved as if to say
"After all the cuts and scrapes
I will still remain"

~Chorus
This sweet fatal attraction
I lust for this deadly action
I can taste the zest
At the time of my tongue
Now the sugar turns to plague
Please bring on my heart attack

~Verse
When will I recall
The pleasure before the pain
As my compassion was slain
A consequence so Great
The love was self-contained

Beside my tomb
Is where you shall lie
Slumber and sleep, but never cry
We are but mere pawns
In time we all must die

~Chorus

~Outro
I sank my teeth into you
And slowly faded away
As if to taste
Your bittersweet kiss

Take it for what it is, Tell me what you think.

[espf-250htd06]

awesome chorus lol acctually the verses are better cool it gains the weston approval but you done knew that cya lata

[espf-250htd06]

Cardiac Arrest
Coronary Compulsion
myocardial Infarction
Immortal Imperfection
never ending battle with instinct
never ending battle with human nature
me Vs. me

theres yal some title choices yal tell me which one is the best

[espf-250htd06]

Acting has consequences
Acting on instinct can have fatal consequences
The human body so strong, sturdy
This weakness of the flesh is what causes the failure
The decision to take life,
Is the decision to have ones life taken.
Bite the bullet from your gun

alternate beginning

just to tell you we are in band together so iam just leaving options on improvement here