final rights

[sherbondy]

the end it seems has come at last
i see death now as the moments pass
i shall not fear it when it comes
in my life regrets there's none
i'm happy as happy can be
the reaper my friend has come for me
may it be swift may it be fast
cause the pain that comes i hope wont last
i've said my goodbyes my final words
flip the switch and i'll fly free with the birds
do not cry or shed a tear
there's another life for me my dear
and as the days flash before my eyes
shall the truth reveal my, whys?
and in the moment just before
i'll think alas, nevermore

I hope you enjoy this song i wrote it while listening to metallica

[bighambino]

It's very cliche. Also the rhyming scheme seems forced. I do like it overall, however. Keep posting.

[the_cure]

yeah, it is really cliche'.
I can't stress the cliche' enough

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

1 song per day.

[sherbondy]

thanks for the feedback. if you read this again think about the song ride the lightining by metallica cause it flows smoother that way thank you though