Yesterdays (first song!)

[Rhoadsmaster_88]

Hey, this is my first post on any forum here, so I hope ya'll like it. :wave:
Little bit of background, this is about an ex-girlfriend of mine.


Yesterdays

Known you all my life, guess that's just how it seems
There's never been another way, living off the dreams

But now that you're leaving me, I just wish I could understand
And before I let you walk away, there's one last demand

Just tell me a lie, please say that you won't go
I want to look in your eyes, and hold you even though
And I realize that it's time to walk away, from all those yesterdays

You used to be an angel, flying high above
The angel looking out for me, my last chance at love

But now the memories are fading, like all the lies and photographs
Kills me inside to look at them, just remainiders of our past

Just tell me a lie, please say that you won't go
I want to look in your eyes, and hold you even though
And I realize that it's time to walk away, from all those yesterdays
(2X)

Maybe we could stay together, please, I want to make this last forever
Now come on baby, it's just a little lie; then maybe we won't have to say,
"Goodbye"

Hope you enjoy it
(Please comment, positive or negative) :chug:

[Adare]

I enjoyed it. It captured my attention and it is something most people can relate to. Pretty good. I'll leave a serious critiqe to someone who feels like it... i don't really.