drum machine, bass, guitar.

[bass_player14]

tell me what you think.click. (http://www.mperia.com/displayfull.php?searchby=song&id=247154 )

[Camel42]

i doesnt let me listen

[bass_player14]

you have to click on the thing on the lower right, that says preview with flash player.

[Camel42]

The rhythm sounds pretty good, some of the transitions seems like the come to soon to me personally. The lead guitar sounds out of key on some notes.

[bass_player14]

yeah, the guitar player just started but i think he is pretty good to be playing for not a year yet.

[Phototropic]

Nice chilled tune you got there, pity the recording quality wasn't up to much

Keep it up though :)

I hear potential

[bass_player14]

thanks, by the way we recorded it with an mp3 player.

[PoWaToM]

it'd sound a LOT better with decent recording equipment, but its my kind of song, so keep it up :P

also yes, some bits were out of tune, unfortunately it's the main riff, sort it please :P

[Phototropic]

Ahh I see

Get a 4-track tape recorder or something

You'll be glad you did in the long run

[bass_player14]

yeah, but the problem is money is hard to come by when you are 14 and saving for a car. lol.

[Phototropic]

Well you have 3 years until you can drive, so put about 80 towards a Tascam MF-P01

I promise you, if you're thinking of taking songwriting seriously it's worth more than the most expensive car you can think of :)