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Camel42
03-25-2005, 05:29 PM
Please tell me if you like or hate these songs.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/hambergmusic.htm
bass_player14
03-25-2005, 05:39 PM
i like them. the lead guitar sounds really cool. could you please crit my song now? lol.
Camel42
03-25-2005, 07:35 PM
anyone willing to offer insight pls?
Liquor_Riss
03-25-2005, 07:49 PM
I really liked them man, good work - especially for your first 2 ever!
peoplecallmeandrew
03-25-2005, 08:40 PM
sweet
Janitor
03-25-2005, 08:48 PM
The beginning of the first one reminded me of Zwan for some reason. Not bad.

The drum beats aren't very good though.
Camel42
03-26-2005, 03:15 AM
Aye, tis a drumming machine
Camel42
03-27-2005, 01:50 PM
bump......
Mr. Squiggles
03-27-2005, 02:45 PM
That sounds really good
Camel42
03-28-2005, 01:39 PM
bump....
deadendsociety66
03-28-2005, 02:25 PM
Absolute awsomeness--- :thumb: Good work and keep making music!
swedelead
03-28-2005, 08:27 PM
I was surprised that I liked it because under style, punk was listed, but awesome job if vocals were added could be awesome.
Camel42
03-28-2005, 11:01 PM
Thanks for the positive responses.

Would you call it something other then punk? My writting is heavily influnced by Metallica, but most of the bands I've been in played punk.
jasonwhite-greendayleadguitar
03-29-2005, 08:24 AM
its got a nice rhythm n notes, put sum lyrics in so peps can hear how u'd sing wit that
swedelead
03-29-2005, 09:55 AM
I would just call it rock the lead guitar in my opinion was to cool to be punk. Sure there are some punk guitar rhythms but my band is one of the farthest things from punk and once in awhile there will still be a punkish rhythm.
lpmeca
03-29-2005, 12:59 PM
Sweet songs man, sounds very well done and you must have some kick *** recording equipment because that sounds perfect. But sadly since it was a drum machine I have to frown on that, just get a real drummer, seriously it will sound way better and have more freedom to do what you want it to sound like.
Camel42
03-29-2005, 03:27 PM
Actually I recorded them on a Boss Br-532 4-track. I used the on board drum machine. Direct Input on the guitar through a digitech RP-12. On RS 4.1 I didn't have my bass handy so I used the on board bass effect, and played it on my guitar.

Unfortunately my band isn't very interested in learning these songs. I don't know why because everyone has given positive feedback on them. For awhile I was thinking that they didn't want to play them because the songs sucked, and I just wasn't aware of that. Now I am thinking that I need a new band.
Camel42
03-30-2005, 04:32 AM
bump....
LivingDeadBoy
03-30-2005, 06:42 AM
****! Let's just say it's great ^-^
Systemtrio
03-30-2005, 01:31 PM
I like the drum machine. I think it works really well with what your doing. Nice Iron Maiden style guitar harmonies