New Acoustic Song (Demo)...

[...someone®]

Hey - Please can someone comment on my songs... - "Trying And Failing" is the one i want you to comment on if you could...

It's only a rough demo (only two tracks, took me about 10 minutes...) - I'll do a proper version later... - With added instruments...

Thanks:

Mikey :thumb:



http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/77satellitesmusic.htm

[...someone®]

Why don't i ever get any comments on here - Anyone?


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Okay - Yeah i have updated the song now - I will still be doing a better version at school - So...

[deadendsociety66]

Not bad, vocals need some work. Sound quality also needs to be improved. Not a bad song but not really great either. Keep playing and keep posting.

[JPP]

well you certainly did try and, yes, you did fail. lol, jk.

[ultraspunk]

it doesn't suck...However, stop singing and get a better recording set up.

[Shadius]

Not half bad, you're not at singing, by any means, you got the job done in that song, and that's all that matters really. Maybe try and make the vocals slightly more interesting if anything. Adding a string arrangement, maybe a single violin in the background would add a lot to this song, a nice sad little riff on it, backing stuff. That'd be really cool.

[dave123]

really liked "trying and falling" very chilled and like the vocals (very brand new) could be better quality i suppose but really good draft i'd say.don't know what to think of your jimmy eat world cover haha...sorta cool i suppose but i don't know if it suits being slow.

could you review my songs in return dude?

http://www.purevolume.com/fivepastfive