Ordinary Man

[deadreign 2]

Ordinary Man

My friend has beome undone
He has made himself into a product
of the relentless atmosphere
overdosed with hostility, with careless love
He is lost now, someone please find him

My friend has become a victim
in a sphere of life and blue rotten water
My friend has become a stereotype
in a ball of illusion and open hopeless land

It is he who is proud of this victim,
proud of the accomplishments
of this stereotype
It is he who is happy to be mindless,
loving the orders of business
in his fragmented frame

I believe he cannot be found
He is the door to downfall,
the crashing down of all fears
He is the kid to chaos,
the road of oblivion, going slowly and surely

Soon my friend is dying
quickly but loudly
lonely and scared

Dying from his lack of immortality
Something he thought he had,
resting in his bones
Dying from his breed of being
Something he thought he knew,
but never realized
he was just like the rest of us

[iAi licks balls]

Pants

[deadreign 2]

???

[caught_on_chaos]

i've just read someone else's work and im gunna say the exact same thing to you as i said to him. good idea's, poor structure, lacks rythem. some of the ideas are gems but they need organising. take some more time over this i think it could be good.

[white_riot]

i think you should rethink the lyrics but i liked your idea. 5/10

[deadreign 2]

thanks for the input.