The Voice of Hastur

[maggotfelon]

Very heavy metal style, obviously. Almost death metal or black metal but not really. So this has a large story rooted in Demonology, but I won't get into all that.


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THE VOICE OF HASTUR
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Hear ye him that howls
Serpent fanged amid the bowels
Of the nether earth
He whose ceaseless roaring
Ever fills the timeless
Skies of hidden lore

Hear ye the voice of dread
Hear ye the mournful sigh
Vortex of ultimate wind
Swirling darkly amongst the silent stars

Hear ye in the dark hours
His call within thine own
Bow ye and pray if he's passing
But don't speak his name aloud

Hear ye him that howls
Serpent fanged amid the bowels
Of the nether earth
He whose ceaseless roaring
Ever fills the timeless
Skies of hidden lore

His might uproot the forest
His hand crushing the city
His blight feeding disaster
His being causing imbalance

No one shall know the hand
That smites the soul and destroys
Faceless and foul accursed one
His form is unknown to man

His might uproot the forest
His hand crushing the city
His blight feeding disaster
His being causing imbalance

Hear ye him that howls
Serpent fanged amid the bowels
Of the nether earth
He whose ceaseless roaring
Ever fills the timeless
Skies of hidden lore

[deadreign 2]

different from many other pieces i read on this forum. but thats a good thing. It cool that it is a story rooted in demonlogy. it gives the writing a more enhanced meaning. Its also coold that your into that stuff and then right poems about it. What you write about here is very interesting and your writing is written with importance. you have some very strong lines and verses here.

[AgrimXXXX]

Not quite my taste, but it's original I'll say that.

Hear ye in the dark hours
His call within thine own
Bow ye and pray if he's passing
But don't speak his name aloud

I liked that verse especially. Nice job. 6/10

[Sloth]

different from many other pieces i read on this forum yeah it's different.. He's maggotfelon! He's the only guy on here who can write about stuff like that and make it good.
Props Mag

[maggotfelon]

Thanks guys.

[white_riot]

that was way different, i always like when people try different things well done. 7/10

[maggotfelon]

Hatchet what?

[maggotfelon]

Rida what?

[maggotfelon]

fine whatever biatch.