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aguywithaguitar
03-22-2005, 03:07 AM
im pretty proud of it too, i call it hotel.
http://s17.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3QEWZXVD06RME2VSF5IY3XGJKB
i might end up playing this with one of the bands im in.
what do you think? do you like it?
timbuktoo kangaroo
03-22-2005, 03:47 AM
I like it. :thumb:
tgrover
03-22-2005, 04:38 AM
yeah not bad...rocked
15sbassist
03-22-2005, 06:50 AM
pretty dam good, maybe a bit heavy for me, add some vocals, sounds promising.
deadendsociety66
03-22-2005, 08:27 AM
Question! Why aren't you breaking your back to get some lyrics on that piece?? That was awsome. Sound quality excellent-Guitars excellent-Drums awsome!

ONE PIECE OF ADVICE!!!
Do not Death Metal or Screamo this up!!! Get someone that doesn't scream the whole time. Actually do some good singing and if you can't find a good vocalist with a nice voice then don't put any vocals on it at all. You have good music don't screw it up with a bad singer. You can scream, just make sure they know how to make it sound decent and not do it the whole time.
aguywithaguitar
03-23-2005, 06:21 PM
haha thanks guys, i dont know what will come of this though.
Corpus Christie
03-23-2005, 07:41 PM
Well blow me and call me charlie. How did you record this bad boy? Where did the drums come from? I'd really like to get recording stuff as good as this. It sounds like you're going through a really good studio.

Good track man, loved it. I feel a very Deftones thing coming on here and I love that lead fill thing. Awsome.
Camel42
03-24-2005, 04:21 AM
Dude your are obviously a professional. Can I be in your band or have preforming rights to that please?
metalguitarplayer
03-24-2005, 04:56 AM
How bout u shut the hell up and save ur advice... do w/e the hell u want with it dude, it's ur song, don't listen to this jerk...

Question! Why aren't you
breaking your back to get some lyrics on that piece?? That was awsome. Sound quality excellent-Guitars excellent-Drums awsome!

ONE PIECE OF ADVICE!!!
Do not Death Metal or Screamo this up!!! Get someone that doesn't scream the whole time. Actually do some good singing and if you can't find a good vocalist with a nice voice then don't put any vocals on it at all. You have good music don't screw it up with a bad singer. You can scream, just make sure they know how to make it sound decent and not do it the whole time.
metalguitarplayer
03-24-2005, 04:57 AM
... on another note i'm diggin the song, keep up the good work:)
Necr0meN
03-24-2005, 05:03 AM
Very nice job, that track has a lot of promise
killfile
03-24-2005, 08:04 AM
How bout u shut the hell up and save ur advice... do w/e the hell u want with it dude, it's ur song, don't listen to this jerk...
Yeah, because clearly the threadstarter didn't post this on here to recieve advice, oh no... metalguitarist, how about you shut the hell up and maybe go drown yourself? It'll be doing us all a favour, really.

I would also say you shouldnt settle for screamo/growled vocals for this piece. It just wouldn't suit it to 'deathmetal' it all up. It's a great track.
virll
03-24-2005, 09:46 AM
HOLY****

thats all i can say really **** good song
post again when you get some vocals
I will download
Camel42
03-24-2005, 01:25 PM
I already downloaded it. What your band name man? Linkin Park? I'll spread the word about this song. How did you learn how to do that?
Phototropic
03-24-2005, 01:31 PM
I enjoyed this song a lot!

I think it stands well on its own as an instrumental, but I know a lot of people do not like instrumentals

I would say leave it like this man :) but it's your choice

Fantastic stuff
ill_fortune
03-24-2005, 03:00 PM
DUDE this song toatally kicks f u c k i n g a s s. This right up my ally . Great job. Sounds so professional what did you record with and how did you make the drums sound so good.
Camel42
03-24-2005, 07:20 PM
I want to know how you got that guitar to sound like that on the melody that occurs 2 times in the song.

I think this guy is in Linkin Park lol.

I also want to know how you wrote that.
aguywithaguitar
03-24-2005, 07:38 PM
my podxt and drumkit from hell 1 is all i used, i love them. ive been recording for like 7 years so that might have helped, and the melody is just a doubler effect. the thing is, i have a whole bunch of songs and im trying to make my second album. i just wanted to know if people actually enjoyed my songs. thanks again for all the positiveness.
Camel42
03-24-2005, 08:23 PM
post all of them
Rats
03-25-2005, 02:21 AM
Question! Why aren't you breaking your back to get some lyrics on that piece?? That was awsome. Sound quality excellent-Guitars excellent-Drums awsome!

ONE PIECE OF ADVICE!!!
Do not Death Metal or Screamo this up!!! Get someone that doesn't scream the whole time. Actually do some good singing and if you can't find a good vocalist with a nice voice then don't put any vocals on it at all. You have good music don't screw it up with a bad singer. You can scream, just make sure they know how to make it sound decent and not do it the whole time.


quoted for truth!
morrissey
03-25-2005, 02:34 AM
How bout u shut the hell up and save ur advice... do w/e the hell u want with it dude, it's ur song, don't listen to this jerk...
roflwofl

Your username indicates a slight bias though.

I didn't listen to the song. Black dot and what not.
BeforeForever12
03-25-2005, 06:43 AM
it was great... i really enjoyed it, and get a good vocal track up...keep up the good work

drake
prone07
03-25-2005, 03:41 PM
cool song man, I really liked it. I really felt a free-flowing kind of Deftones vibe, but that was just the guitar. I'd like to hear some more of your stuff.
Camel42
03-28-2005, 01:43 PM
where do i get this drum kit from hell 1?
deadendsociety66
03-28-2005, 02:18 PM
How bout u shut the hell up and save ur advice... do w/e the hell u want with it dude, it's ur song, don't listen to this jerk...

Its an opinion, not like I'm holding him at gunpoint to follow my advice. Christ, grow up, save your ignorance for someone that will be willing to slap a block upside their head hopefully lowering their IQ to your level.

Secondly, other posters here are behind me and feel the same way advice wise as I do.
hihatx
03-28-2005, 03:45 PM
id say like slipknot vocals when there not yelling melotic metal
Pale-Folklore
03-28-2005, 03:57 PM
id say like slipknot vocals when there not yelling melotic metal

AAHHHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHA
Camel42
03-28-2005, 04:23 PM
I personally think rapping and metal vocals would suit this one.

Where do i find drum machine form hell1?
aguywithaguitar
03-30-2005, 03:43 PM
http://www.toontrack.com/
drummer_411
03-30-2005, 06:07 PM
link expired before i could give it a listen :angry: :upset:

could you repost it or somehting, after reading all the reviews i really want to hear it!
Mr. Squiggles
03-31-2005, 07:14 AM
You should set up a soundclick account that way the link never expires.
bitesizebeeeen
03-31-2005, 09:14 PM
i wanan hear it..but the link has expired..so repost it pleease